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202play Halloween Story

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J-Cat

Oh Gatsu.....  this one is for you! I hope you enoy!


CNN’s coverage of the zombie apocalypse droned in the background as Gatsu and Julie double checked their defensive preparations. “Shotguns, ammo, food, water... we missing anything?”.  Gatsu sighed in response. “It all just seems so...  I dunno.”  She cocked her head to one side, puzzled. Gatsu looked up with a sly, crooked, grin. “Just sayin’... I won’t eat your face, if you don’t eat mine.”


Okay: when I wrote this I had a vision for how I wanted the reader to read into this story, but I am not sure that I got it right.  I will post my ideas in the comments section so that it's separate. I want to see if you guys read into it what I wanted you to. So, other than that: anyone else taking up the challenge? Must be 75 word or less halloween story about a fellow 2old2play member. Or if you really want to: punch it up to 100... but keep it really short.

Comments (6)

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J-Cat·
other than the ... sexiness of the question, I wanted people to wonder if Gatsu and Julie decided to just give into the zombie horde.\r \r How did I do?
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LuxDevil67·
your explanation is longer than the story!
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Lbsutke·
Uh...I thought they were going to do it, one last time before having to shoot some zombie face...
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Devonsangel·
Nope, didn't get that J. You lost me after Gatsu sighed.:)
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Gatsu·
hehehehe awesome.
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LuxDraconis·
ok, I get it....so, what was the Idea you wanted me to write?